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Wednesday, 13 March 2019

The House











The house was shaking it was creaky it was dark it had shared windows dead plants it smelt like old moldy food.The paint is peeling off wood was falling and smashing on the ground and the garden was not done in a long time like the lawn needs to be mowed dust was getting in my mouth It felt like could not breath.

 WALT we had to chose a photo of our choice and describe about what is in the photo

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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous19 March 2019 at 09:13

    Hi Gustan,

    Great start to your writing. Maybe you could write some more. I look forward to seeing your finished story.

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