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Monday 28 August 2017

Red

Red  
Red is the ruby that shines on a crown
Red is the lava like the nose of a clown
Red are the flames that warm me each night
Red is the blood I see after a fight.
Red are tomatoes I eat in my soup
Red are the badges we use for our troop
I like read because it is a cheerful warm colour.

By Gustan McDonald.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 September 2017 at 11:28

    Hi Guston its Saxon from yaldhurst model school and I really like your blog post about red. It was real cool and it makes me remember a blog post that I did like that.

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    1. Anonymous25 September 2017 at 14:45

      Hi Saxon, It is Gustan hear thank you for punting more comments on my blog and you made me laugh when you made a post like mine

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  2. Anonymous31 October 2017 at 12:07

    Hi Guston, I really like your poem about red. I'm not really good at poems. Maybe you could make it more intersding. Why did you make the color of the words red.

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  3. Anonymous7 December 2017 at 11:51

    Hey Gustan I really like the doc.And also how some of it rhymes. next time you could put a picture there.

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