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Thursday, 1 August 2019

Paragraph Writing

As the man sits there looking like he has been disrespected he slumps in a corner feeling sorry for himself, sitting there in silence you heard the rain crashing on the roof and the trees swishing through, then the rain stops then the bugs and rats came crawling around everywhere.


 And again the rain came back and all the bugs went back to hide while the dirt was clogging up the shed, then a dash of light came in and you saw dead rats spiders and other bugs on the ground. Trying to remember the good times but he can’t all the pain was holding him back. Then he fell asleep he was dreaming that if he was happy he would be out of this shed in no time.

WALT… 
  • Use paragraphs to link similar ideas together
  • write in structured, well developed paragraphs that flow well from one to the next within the text
  • use linking words and phrases to link paragraphs for effect
Use the following image to generate a plan using your five senses.
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  1. Claire Wilton19 August 2019 at 14:31

    Well done Gustan, you have worked hard to use descriptive words to paint a picture in the reader's head. You have done well making sure your paragraphs have similar ideas and have used words to make a link between them. Keep up the great work.

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