The Secret Pill
When I opened my eyes I sat up then I saw 2 big fat eyes looking eyes at me. Then
he said “I see you have got a pill” and i said “um yes”.then the big fat eye was starting
to get closer then bend down and said “squish it as hard as you can it will give you awesome
powers” then he started to walk away then I said “HEY! How long do I have these powers for?”
then he stopped and turned around said “24 hours”
he said “I see you have got a pill” and i said “um yes”.then the big fat eye was starting
to get closer then bend down and said “squish it as hard as you can it will give you awesome
powers” then he started to walk away then I said “HEY! How long do I have these powers for?”
then he stopped and turned around said “24 hours”
This is great Gustan. I like that you have used speech marks correctly in your writing. Maybe next time you could include, what you have been learning to your post. This will help me give you more specific feedback. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to seeing more from you.
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