Pervasive Writing Top 10

Today I will be discussing the reasons what is the number one Mario game in the universe, what do you think is the best Mario game.

10)Super Mario 3D World Because it is a game that you would not go back after you finish and the cat costume what a stupid idea even though you can climb the flagpole at the end.

 9)Super Mario 64 DS Nintendo tried too hard to do a sequel on this game because the courses are much harder than before but I like how the bad guys look better.

8)Mario + Rabbit's Kingdon Battle First, not a lot of people got this game and second Mario fighting Rabbit's, come on Nintendo you can do better.

7)New Super Mario Bros 2 The whole game is about getting coins and when you get a lot of coins you just get a statue on the home page and if you get more coins you get a different statue.

6)Super Mario Run The game is a mobile game so if people want it on the Nintendo well you can’t and the problem is if you mistake your jump you can’t go back.

5)Mario Kart DS Now this game was really good but it is not like Mario Kart 7 how you can make your kart and if you what to unlock more characters it is much harder.

4)Super Mario World This is a game where you will go back to this is where we were intjust to Yoshi and how you can ride on his back and the cape what a different power-up.

3)Super Mario 64 This game was the first 3D game this game is much better then 64 DS because you would have so much fun with the maps and the adventure on the game is so fun so I had to put it on number 3.

2)Super Mario Odyssey This game was not my favorite but it was really good because Mario show his emotions so if he is cold he starts to shake if he gets wet you can see him wet but the boss fights could be harder.

1)Super Mario Sunshine This is a game that people don’t like but this is an excellent game because you are not in the castle you are on an island cleaning it up and if have a mistake on jumping you can redo it and you have more power ups that you can unlock easily.

There is a lot of Mario games out there that I could use but Super Mario Sunshine is the best game out there, what do you think what's your best Mario game. Gustan McDonald

I really enjoyed looking though the games and saying something about the games.
I did not enjoy is that it took so long to come up with.
next time I would know what games I am doing before I write    

Paragraph Writing

As the man sits there looking like he has been disrespected he slumps in a corner feeling sorry for himself, sitting there in silence you heard the rain crashing on the roof and the trees swishing through, then the rain stops then the bugs and rats came crawling around everywhere.


 And again the rain came back and all the bugs went back to hide while the dirt was clogging up the shed, then a dash of light came in and you saw dead rats spiders and other bugs on the ground. Trying to remember the good times but he can’t all the pain was holding him back. Then he fell asleep he was dreaming that if he was happy he would be out of this shed in no time.

WALT… 

• Use paragraphs to link similar ideas together
• write in structured, well developed paragraphs that flow well from one to the next within the text
• use linking words and phrases to link paragraphs for effect

Use the following image to generate a plan using your five senses.